Dear Mercenaries Guild,
                My name is Kenny Enriquez and I'm interested in joining The Mercenaries Guild.I am sixteen years old and I live in Pomona, California . On my spare time I enjoy such hobbies as skateing, paintballing, playing guitar, and surfing. My communication skills and grammer skills are adequate since I do make a mistake there and now. I am a responsible person who always puts work before games. I enjoy listeing to music such as metal, heavy metal, death metal, classical rock, rock, alternative, some country, and rap. I am going to become a junior and am going to attend The School Of Arts And Enterprise here in Pomona. Its a great school to be at because we do a lot of events such as Battle Of The Bands, Dances, Etc. I enjoy playing tremulous and being on the forums daily. I'm on the puretremulous forums frequently and  I know quite a lot of MG players such as Garoth, Atom Eve, Rend, David, Benmachine, Exclamation, Events (recruit), Soldier(recruit),and Powa(recruit) . I don't like racism or discrimanation, I believe all people are made equally and should be treated the same no matter what color or what religion you are. I used to be in MS but MS is now died out because of inactive members. I used to be in Epic as well but of course that died out as well but later after Ms died out I found Nomad and I joined their clan and now and Cesium run it. I live with both my parents and have one little brother name Alex. I enjoy nature and I love being outdoors were the fresh air runs through your face. I can handle any task given no matter how hard or how fustrating it can be. I always try to finish what I started and I never give up no matter what the odds look like. I'm a pretty down to earth dude who loves hanging out and haveing fun with friends. I enjoy helping new players out in the tremulous community why?, because when I started to play tremulous I too had a hard time learning how to play and I want to make it easyer for them by showing them how to play. I have worked at a pet shelter, CVS, and Smart & Final. I write poetry and also I enjoy reading book from such aurthors like Edgar Allen Poe. I want to studie mostly mechanics because my dream in life is to own a Harvey Davidson Shop. I want to build and custom Harleys in my own unique style. Well thats pretty much my life on what I do, what I've done, and what I enjoy doing.

Reason why I want to join mercenaries guild:
1: Mature players
2: Its been around for awhile.
3: The players here know what their doing.
4: Don't have to worry about it dieing out like other clans/guilds.
5: Friendlesy bunch of guys I've played with in my time on puretremulous.
6: Great Admins who work hard.
7: Become part of this magnificant guild.
8: Help others that need help.

                                                                                                         Thank you for your time,
                                                                                                               Your truly:Shagrath                                       

Do you? Do you really?

He never said he has good spelling.

Also, you have two dogs, one's a female, one's a female?

Of course I make little mistakes .
No deathonice that was a mistake. What I ment to say was that ones a female and ones a male.

I think he may have been referring to the apostrophes.
We don't mind errors of that kind usually but after you specifically said you were good at grammar it does kinda seem a bit odd.
Haven't you um already applied? I don't know what happened to the first one but if it failed then you're not allowed to reapply immediately.
Your actual application wasn't bad though. I'll leave the verdict to someone who pays more attention than I.

I don't know what happen either. I applied and waited more then a month I believe and I never got an answer so I decided to apply again but this time I changed my application and made a different one. Better then my first I say. Will see what happens with this one though. I really want to get into MG and I'm willing to wait but they said it takes a month to get a straight out answer but I never got anything. So here  I am again. My grammer eh to me its great since I've improved a lot since last time but for you guys I'd have to say its adequate.

Yeah, you have to ask to be put on the rec board. Welcome to the MGR group (again) and good luck

It's grammar. Grammar. Spelling it incorrectly is a pet peeve of mine, so ignore my spasming over here in the corner.

That being said, no one told you that you couldn't use the MGR tag in your previous thread, so I don't see anywhere that you've been "rejected", so to speak. However, I would like to see a bit more from applications than your last one, and there's nothing anywhere that says you can't fix an application to make it look better (and this application does, admittedly, look a bit better).

So, at any rate, I don't see any reason why you shouldn't be able to start using the MGR tag. That is, unless someone else comes along and says differently.

I'm really hurt that Eve's karma is negative. All her posts have been pure quality so far. Where has she gone wrong?!

Anyway, Shagrath. I'll be overly blunt: my instincts tell me that your chance of getting into The Guild is very low. I'd think it be better that you know now than 1-2 months from now.

Garoth, probably a bitter recruit. I have no idea when my karma shot up.

Shag, you could've modified your old app, but I guess you might as well delete it now. Best of luck.

Your sentences are a little too staccato for my tastes.

I am Guy. I like Stuff. I am in School. School is Fun. Fun is School. Dogs I have Have.

But I suppose that's just being really, really picky. You're welcome to wear the MGR tag now.

Thank you.
Posted on: April 13, 2008, 01:46:05 AM

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Hey guys I've waited more then two months and I wanted to be put in the rec. Boards. Been more then two months actually.

You never asked. Technically.

Yea I forgot all about it because Nomad is going through a little snag. I remember though.

Nomad? Lemme guess. Crysis. I have a copy, too.